CONTEST: Write a Children's Story!

[Bebita]

THAT BANANA THERE!
Slide #1:
I like eating bananas!

Image and sound: Picture of a happy child surrounded by a lot of bananas, one banana in his hand, rubbing his tummy, with a 'mmmm' sound.

Slide#2:
First mommy goes to buy the banana for me.

Image: Mommy shopping for bananas.

Slide#3: Then I pop the banana into my mouth.

Image and sound: Picture a child popping a banana into his mouth, with a 'gulp' sound.

Slide#4: And suddenly that banana is gone!

Image and sound: Picture of a surprised child with an empty hand, accompanied by a 'gone' sound.

Slide #5: I started to think of all the hard work that goes into bringing that banana to me:

Image: Picture of a child thinking, surrounded by a few 'thinking' bubbles picturing the growth of a banana from a seed to a tree bearing fruit.

Slide#6: All of the clearing

Image and sound: Picture of the field being cleared with the appropriate sound (if possible).

Slide#7: All of the plowing

Image and sound: Picture of the field being plowed with the appropriate sound.

Slide#8: All of the planting

Image and sound: Picture planting the banana seeds (show one big seed in the corner of a slide) with the appropriate sound.

Slide#9: All of the watering

Image and sound: Picture the little plants growing and the field being watered with the appropriate sound.

Slide#10: All of the fertilizing

Image and sound: Picture bigger banana plants and the field being fertilized, with the appropriate sound.

Slide#11: All of the harvesting

Image and sound: Picture the grown trees and the bananas being harvested, with the appropriate sound.

Slide#12: All of the transporting

Image and sound: Picture different kinds of transport from a truck to a boat... with the appropriate sounds.

Slide#13: All of the marketing

Image: Picture different kinds of shops displaying the bananas.

Slide#14: I'm very thankful for all of the hard work, time and care that went into the making of that banana there!

Image: Picture a child waving, standing next to a crate of bananas with a speech bubble saying 'Thank you!' You can have a picture of a monkey eating banana too, just for fun..

[Sapna1322]

Hmmm Banana's

[Nikita]

Bubby’s Busy Day          By Nicole

Slide 1:
Wake up! Good morning!
Stop your yawning!
Wakey-wakeys mummy,
A new day is dawning.

Image 1: bubby in cot standing up holding on to bar, all excited she’s awake.

Slides 2, 3 and 4:
Mum changes my nappy,
And gives me milk to drink.
Then she dresses me up,
From head to toe in pink.

Image 2: Mum changing bub’s nappy  Image 3: mum cuddling bub and giving  bottle of milk Image 4: mum putting pink clothes on bub.

Slides 5 and 6:
We go out for a drive,
I’m strapped into the car.
I fall fast asleep,
And we haven’t gone far!

Image 5: Bub in car seat, awake. Image 6:Bub in carseat, asleep.

Slide 7 and 8:
When we get home,
My mum wakes me up.
I have something to eat,
And I drink from a cup.

Image 7: eating, covered in mess. Image 8: drinking from cup.

Slide 9 and 10:
I play with my pussy-cat,
Patting her paws,
So soft and furry,
Ouch! Out come her claws.

Image 9: bubby patting cats with one hand, pulling tail with another. Image 10: cat scratching bub, bub looking horrified and teary.

Slide 11 and 12:
I read a big book,
Sitting in my mum’s lap.
I fall off to noddy-land,
And she puts me down for a nap.

Image 11: Sitting in mum’s lap, reading. Image 12:Sleeping on flip-out sofa.

Slide 13 , 14 and 15.
Dad gives me a bath,
Then towels me all dry.
He puts on my PJs,
Then I go beddy-byes.

Image 13: Bub in bath Image 14. Towelled dry Image 15. In cot asleep.

[Nikita]

More pics for this story... could turn it into a download.

[nhockaday]

She is too cute! And I loved this one and the shoes one!

[lawrencelb]

I agree - Nikita, great stories!!  The shoes and the bears - how fabulous are they!! Wow.

[Nikita]

Thanks, but the last one I'm not happy with, I just rushed writing it to get it in before the deadline. Or are they extending it again... I have more stories in mind, not enough time to get them written.  How do working mothers do it?? Just trying to get a spare moment to writie a story was a nightmare.

[lawrencelb]

I hear you Nikita - I had lots of ideas too- just no time.  Sometimes I get really frustrated b/c I know there is no possible way to get all of the things done that I hope to accomplish with and for my kiddos while they are still young.  We'll just have to keep doing the best we can, I guess!

[oliverale]

 
My Story is in Spanish.
Is a about a Duckie that feels frustated about learning to swim, but with the help of his mom, he do it and feels brave.

[akgard]

When will you announce the winner?

[Lappy]

We're currently in the process of deliberation - we were able to receive a lot of entries and it takes a while to read through and judge them all! 

We'll be announcing the winner soon so please stay tuned...

[nohayo]

Even though I didn't participate in this contest, I'm soooo excited to know the winner !  All the stories were just great and I bet it'll be so hard picking only 1 winner 

[akgard]

I agree!  I can't wait to see the winner's story done by a professional!!!

[Nikita]

MY father's a professional artist... he does the best kids picture book style illustrations I've ever seen!

[nhockaday]

well you two should team up then!

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